The Sun is Blessed Embracing You
52Written By: Darren Bocksnick © 2009
The sun is blessed embracing you in warm, celestial light,
At gazing on your beauty from aloft its stately heights,
The moon delights showcasing you, spotlighting from afar,
The wind is pleased to dance with you beneath admiring stars,
The flowers kneel at sight of you and bloom their sweet fragrance,
They yield their bright, perfumed bouquets an off’ring of romance,
All nature sings your loveliness with songs of sacred bliss,
The earth joins in the ambiance as Heaven blows a kiss,
Your sweetness is the essence that inspires angelic hymn,
The pureness of your presence is a rare and precious gem,
Those lustrous strands of braided curls form the perfect crown,
And compliment your classy style- a queen in royal gown,
Your entrancing smile captivates and steals away the heart,
Those enthralling looks fascinate, a breathe-taking work of art,
Alluring eyes that mesmerize and mirror the divine,
Endearing thoughts I visualize envisioning one so fine,
Exuberant, exhilarating more than feelings can express,
Transparent, invigorating you personify finesse,
Resilient, resonating making music with your smile,
Brilliant, captivating weaving magic with your style,
Your elegant exquisiteness is an aura of mystique,
Your radiant attractiveness compliments your physique,
Exceeding definition that no words can quite convey,
Because you defy description more than thoughts on page portray,
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Thank you AEvans for your kind and thoughtful words. I'm glad to know it inspired you in some way to look at things a little differently! ( }:^D)
nice one
This is reminding me in tone and rhythm of Lord Byron's "She Walks in Beauty, Like the Night." One of my favorites from the Romantics. :)
Nice poems! I am happy with the words: "Exceeding definition that no words can quite convey"
A wonderful song of praise to the sun - beautiful words, beautiful emotions - this really lights you up as you read! And you use the 'fourteener' so well!
Absolutely beautiful poem! You have so much inside of you and express it all in the most creative manner. Every woman dreams to be loved to that degree. She longs for her partner to feel and convey words of this magnatude. You are an artist in the highest sense of the word. I am blessed to have found you on HP and eager to read more hubs by you.
Who is this perfect creature in your existence? Too perfect but obviously, since you're from Texas, she could be your horse. LOL there is a very musical rhythm to your poetry.
OK, Darren, I'm back again to appreciate your poem with more seriousness. I guess my joke about "your horse" fell flat and was unappreciated since you didn't comment. Personally, in all false pride, I consider myself the greatest humorist since Sam Clemons. You know that you wrote a spectacular poem and don't need me to remind you!
Gorgeous poem! Your words, imagery, and amazing story-telling ability--made my day. I cannot wait to take a look and peruse your other writings :)
AEvans Level 7 Commenter 3 years ago
I will always look at my flowers differently, along with the moon and sun and making music with a smile how wonderfully brilliant!!!:)